Winter pond

I had a special request from my Mum for a watercolour I painted last year. It also happens to be one of BB's favourite ones, so I'm trying to reproduce it, so we can have a version in both locations. As is often the case, it's hard to achieve the same spontaneity the second time round! I feel the colours are quite good and the actual trees work ok - they're quite dreamy -, but my reflections are dreadful. I went far too chunky with my oil pastel stick! Here is a cropped version of it. I think I'll have another go. What do you think?