Songlines - A crack in the voice

Trying to work on two different views at the same time. On Hahnemuhle Cornwall Hot press, 48x48ccm. Not sure my brain can process. I think it's too much for me. I like the first one so far. The second one, not so much. Maybe I need to leave it to the side for a bit. Or throw more water at it!

Second layer

Details

First layer

Watercolour pencil notes on the pages. Most of those have disappeared by now. Glad I took a photo.